Sunday, February 14, 2010

The Importance of being Ernest Body Paragraph

As you guys know I am writing about the relationship between Jack/Ernest and Gwendolen, and how opposites attract. My first detail is Jack questioning is Gwendolen would still love him if his name wasn't Ernest. This shows how opposites attract because Jack loves everything about Gwendolen, while Jack only loves the thought of being with someone named Ernest.
My second detail is when Gwendolen tell Cecily she is to young and pretty to be around Jack. The point I got from this is how Gwendolen thinks men can't have young women around them. Jack is different he keeps Cecily out of kindness not physical attraction. I haven't got my final detail and commentary, but it will be similar to the first two. Good luck with your paragraphs.

4 comments:

  1. I know I'm not in your group, but I'm going to comment anyway. I was wondering how these topics relate to the theme "opposites attract". I also did this theme, but I divided my paragraph up into three sections: Jack and Gwendolyn, Algernon and Cecily, and Chasuble and Miss Prism. Maybe for the last concrete detail, you might try writing about Miss Prism and Dr. Chasuble. By the way, nice logo.

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  2. I would but our group has three people, the only way we could divide it up evenly was giving each person a relationship.

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  3. I like your two details so far. They support the thesis. I think that we should reword the thesis a little because i was finding a little difficuly on writing a transition. Also remeber to be answering the questions which i think we should involve more in our thesis. Overall this is good and good luck on that last concrete detail.

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  4. dude i need to work on mine i realized that nothing really related we should reword the thesis and ill reword my paragraph

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